Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Does family shape one's identity? How? Why?

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Intro: Meaning of family
Thesis: “You don't choose your family. They are God's gift to you, as you are to them.” Says thinkexist.com because in my opinion we are we our family is, because they raised us and we have a part of them.

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One’s identity from the family
How we get our identity from them
Talk about how my family gave me my identity

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Why we get our identity from our family

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Compare my identity to Sarah’s identity in “Shooting Dad”
Similarities of my identity to Sarah’s identity

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Conclusion: restate part of my thesis and put in my last opinion

Tuesday, September 22, 2009

The benefits and disadvantages of collaboration

There are a lot of benefits of working together in a group. One of the benefits is splitting the project in parts so each member of the group can participate. Also if writing a group essay it’s easier to get the groups ideas and only one person has to write it but everybody has to work together. Working in groups also gets the work done faster depending on the project. But some of the disadvantages of working in group is that one of the member won’t put their part in and then someone else is stuck doing double the work. Say if a group member doesn’t show up for presentation then the whole group gets messed up and ends up getting points taking away because that one person I hate that.

Tuesday, August 25, 2009

My blog

My first blog!!!